Riverclan Medicine Cat Apprentice

With Oakpaw's demotion due to inactivity, I will be holding a new try out form for the cats.
Here is the form!
Name:
Age:
Gender:
How active will you be?:
Roleplay sample:

And here is a quick Jaystick bio so you know who he is
Name
Jaystick
Age
14 moons
Gender
Male
How active will you be?
I am the owner. I am acttive.
Roleplay sample
The grey molly sat quietly. "You really want to know?" She sighed. "Okay, brace yourself for a walk down the memory path" She settled herself against the warm stone, leaning against one of the fallen trees. This cat doesn't deserve to know, A small voice whispered in her ear. Yes.... It cooed Don't tell her anything, Shatteredpaw was going to stand up before deciding to ignore her voices for once. "So I was hunting with Eelpaw and Deadheart," She began. "And then Eelpaw started to tease me... About something," About us? The voice hissed. You should've shown him what It meant to mess with us, "So I got mad at him, and I clawed him. I didn't mean to hurt him, but he ran off. Then it was just me and Deadheart. He threatned me, y'know" She shivered. "He said he'd tell the whole clan about... this thing,... if I didn't apologize to his son Eelpaw. I didn't want to apologize, of course, because it was all Eelpaw's fault I attacked him. So I kind of just... lost control" Lose control? The voice murmured. No, Shatteredpaw... you were gaining control, not losing it "So, I, uh, I jumped onto Deadheart. I really didn't mean to cripple him, but when we were wrestling I shoved him down the hillside. It was an accident! But he crashed into a tree and... He can't walk well now, it's all my fault" It's not your fault! It hissed. It was that mangy toad's fault for teasing you

name: Oakpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: female
How active am I: I'm a Moderator so every active.
Roleplaying sample: *do I have to do this? She is a jayfeather basically*

Darky wrote:name: Oakpaw
Age: 7 moons
Gender: female
How active am I: I'm a Moderator so every active.
Roleplaying sample: *do I have to do this? She is a jayfeather basically*

Yes you have to do this. 5+ sentencces

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*thinks*

"Come on Oakpaw!" Oakpaw mentor tells her as she is in training.
"I can't see" Oakpaw says as her mentor doesn't believe her. Oakpaw falls as she is tackled by the other apprentice.
"Oakpaw are you okay?" The other mentor ask.
"No, I'm begging forced to fight when I can't see, I don't think I'm going to be a warrior" Oakpaw said.
"You should rest for today" Oakpaw mentor says as they head back to the apprentice den. Oakpaw nodded her head as she layed in her nest heading off to sleep. (I tried my best)

mkay
Oakpaw is re-accepted.... If you can active